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The engine roared in the black Geo Storm as I tore down the highway. Linkin Park blared from the radio, and the rain fell heavily. The sun barely showed through the thick mass of black clouds. I was a flaming ball of rage, ready to destroy anything in my path. "Slow down, man," Mollie said. "You're gonna kill us. "I'm not gonna kill us! We're getting outta here, and I mean NOW!" I mashed the pedal to the floor, and the spedometer pushed 115. "I'm tired of this! I'm tired of their stupidity! I'm not going back there!" I screamed. I breathed a bit and let off the gas. "Look, Mol, we got everything we need- I got my online business, you got a good work history. All we gotta do is get there, and get set up." "I know, Neil. But calm down, alright? The best way to get through this is to keep yourself together. I know what your parents put you through, and I understand, but we don't need to wind up in the hospital in some kind of wreck." I tried to relax in my seat. "Get the map out of the glove box," I said.
 
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