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yunglovers143
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I used to write all the time but I haven't in years. It's hard to get back into it but I gave it a try. Here are the first two that I've written. i would love some opinions. Thankss =]
1-
Fall
The trees were as dead as the love she once held in her heart for him
Winter
The air was as frigid as her feelings tword him
Spring
The flowers were blooming like her new love
Summer
The air wasn't nearly as hot as the flame that burned in her heart
2-
they drove out to the woods
they threw a blanket down upon the ground
he layed his hand upon hers
as they watched the stars streak across the sky
he held her close
not wanting to say goodbye
the night was foggy
the air was cool
they could only feel the warmth of eachother
every movement
each breathe
each beat of the others heart
so close they could feel the flutter of the butterflies they both had
she lie there with him hand in hand
body in body
soul in soul
knowing this was her perfect fairytale
avoiding what she knew was coming
ultimately they would have to part ways
1-
Fall
The trees were as dead as the love she once held in her heart for him
Winter
The air was as frigid as her feelings tword him
Spring
The flowers were blooming like her new love
Summer
The air wasn't nearly as hot as the flame that burned in her heart
2-
they drove out to the woods
they threw a blanket down upon the ground
he layed his hand upon hers
as they watched the stars streak across the sky
he held her close
not wanting to say goodbye
the night was foggy
the air was cool
they could only feel the warmth of eachother
every movement
each breathe
each beat of the others heart
so close they could feel the flutter of the butterflies they both had
she lie there with him hand in hand
body in body
soul in soul
knowing this was her perfect fairytale
avoiding what she knew was coming
ultimately they would have to part ways