Kitty (K.M.L)
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All you really need to know is that
- Varlin's the head of this huge gang kind of thing,
- Alexia is the leader of an elite force that works for him
- The narrator, Leah, is in love with one of Alexia's followers (Laian)
Sorry if that's too vague, but I don't want to give away too much :/
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/K.M.-Lindsay/650671/
Honest opinions?
Sabrina, did you follow the link? That's the part that I want reviewed, not the vague outline I put at the top.
- Varlin's the head of this huge gang kind of thing,
- Alexia is the leader of an elite force that works for him
- The narrator, Leah, is in love with one of Alexia's followers (Laian)
Sorry if that's too vague, but I don't want to give away too much :/
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/K.M.-Lindsay/650671/
Honest opinions?
Sabrina, did you follow the link? That's the part that I want reviewed, not the vague outline I put at the top.