What do you think of my villanelle poem?

Title: Don't Tread on Me

Don't Tread on me.
Rattling tail, I will fight
So prepare for war!

Coiled in a corner, I feel threatened you see?
Your soul has misguided sight.
Don't tread on me.

You're my enemy, you make me sore.
Who knew that darkness can be so bright?
So prepare for war!

So be it, come by air, come by sea.
You mean nothing to me and I will strike.
Don't tread on me.

Begin your assault, let's settle the score.
With a gun I'll snipe.
So prepare for war!

Bring it on, give me more!
You can't beat me!
Don't tread on me!
So prepare for war!
Repatition of 2 line such as "don't tread on me" or "so prepare for war" is what a villanelle is. If you don't like it, DON'T READ IT B*TCH!!!
 
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