What do you think of my story?

Sophie

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this was a part of my dream and i woke up in shock and thought it would be a good story to write down. Please leave opinions :

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It was emotional .. The pain ripped across my heart from the moment I saw my baby being carried away from me ... The bloodshot eyes, it's skin were covered in blood .. That bi*ch ! Why did she do such a thing ? How can she . I closed my eyes as the never ending tears were traveling down my cheeks . " please baby please , open your eyes for mama." why won't you Baby? You know that mama loves you from the moment, I knew you were inside me, right ? I would give my everything to you and swap that to make you my everything baby. I would swap you for my oxygen.

He stood quietly next to me not making a sound, not even so much as breathing. He was starring at you, baby. What is he thinking ? Was he hoping that our child will survive this? I looked at him , for a long time. He glaze meet mine, I looked into his eyes .. I couldn't see a thing, was he angry ? Sad ? Happy .. ? I was longing for him to comfort me .. For him to touch me. Can he read that in my eyes ?
More tears come down as I thought of you, baby, the colour of her eye - she had very nice eyes the colour of emerald jade it was so mysterious , from which her father gave to her. But her hair was the most prettiest thing I've seem ! It was dark but also had a tone of gingerness to it. Her skin was so fair - inherited from her father. Baby you will be the prettiest in everyones eyes, you can even be a super model. But my baby.. You were so small . Well that's not surprising me since you barely are 7 months old.
 
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