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Rosie H
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OK, so my story is about a couple of highschool friends, who are all in different cliques. It's a love story between the two main characters, Will and Scarlet (who he affectionately calls, 'Scar').
It's about a girl named Scarlet Paige who lives a hectic life-style. Her mom is always at work, and she has to watch over her baby-brother, Alex (age 7) all day. At school she gets harassed because she's punk, and she has so much anger and frustration held against her family, like how her father has drug addiction problems, and how her grandmother doesn't want a thing to do with her, just because of the wrong-choices her parents have made.
Scarlett has lost all faith on humanity, until she meets a boy named Will, who inspires her to do something with her own life, and teaches her what's important, and Scarlett finally learns to let go of her anger against her loved ones, and forgives them. The End.
Please be brutally honest!!! Any story-suggestions would be great!!
It's about a girl named Scarlet Paige who lives a hectic life-style. Her mom is always at work, and she has to watch over her baby-brother, Alex (age 7) all day. At school she gets harassed because she's punk, and she has so much anger and frustration held against her family, like how her father has drug addiction problems, and how her grandmother doesn't want a thing to do with her, just because of the wrong-choices her parents have made.
Scarlett has lost all faith on humanity, until she meets a boy named Will, who inspires her to do something with her own life, and teaches her what's important, and Scarlett finally learns to let go of her anger against her loved ones, and forgives them. The End.
Please be brutally honest!!! Any story-suggestions would be great!!