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Sorry I know I’ve posted this before but I just need more answers so please read! Thanks.Okay here it goes but just so you know this is only a vague idea and i’m not sure and I don't know the details and i’m just seeing what people think! I will probably still write it just for my own enjoyment but...yea! I just wanted to know what people think!?Tessa joins a ballet/dance school (i’m not sure what time era) because her parents desperately want her to have a good education in dance. But she is pretty clumsy and keeps tripping on her own feet, so she doesn't do very well. The school is half girls dance and half boy’s grammar school kind of thing! But the girls and the boys rarely mix. Then one day, Tessa is skipping lunch to practice her dancing and trips then, Robert (a boy who she hadn't noticed watching her but secretly has been every time she skips lunch to practice dancing) catches her. He helps her and she gets better. After that they meet every lunch and practice, they fall in love...He starts sneaking into her room at night and he takes her to his favourite spot to watch the moon and sometimes the sunrise. They kiss. Then when everything seems perfect one night he comes to her and says that he must say goodbye as his sister, 8yr old Emily, is in grave danger. She insists on coming with him and he isn't strong enough to leave her so he agrees. he takes her away from the school and explains every thing (e.g. he comes from a far away planet where every one has some sort of gift, like controlling water, moving stuff with eyes, inflicting pain with out touching people, extra. 2yrs ago he came to Earth after he killed three men who were trying to kill his mother. and now they have contacted him to tell him that they want further punishment and him sister is being held captive and is sentenced to death unless he takes her place. so he must go back and save her.oh, and somewhere along the lie we find out she has a supernatural gift like him…I’m not sure what any suggestions?) so he takes Tessa's hand and they fly (that’s his gift...) through the starts at light speed to his home planet.They stay with Robert's friend, Eliza, but Eliza has a humongous crush on Robert and things are all a bit aqward. I’m still working out how but things happen and time passes with failed attempts to save Emily. On the 2nd attempt Tessa is taken by Taylor (who can inflict horrific pain with his eyes) and puts her in a cell with Emily. All seems lost but, without any one knowing, Eliza puts herself in their place and is put to death...I’m not sure what happens next but how’s that? Please be nicexxxxxp.s sorry I know it’s a bit long!oh and i don't plan it to be an alien kinda story with all si-fi and that!and also it will be a happy ending so dont worryi just had a thought...mabye her gift is that she can talk to animals!? what do you think...xxi just had a thought...mabye her gift is that she can talk to animals!? what do you think...xx
