What do you think of my sonnet?

Waffle Bunny~!

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Ehh, I didn't follow ALL the rules of a sonnet, but I was mostly trying to get the syllables just right. Dx Besides, I didn't wanna go back and erase what I already wrote just so it could fit the exact replica of a sonnet:


Wishing, ..merely wishing to wrap you up.
In a love so deep, bursting, transedent.
Flourishing with flurocent lights.
The moon, sun and stars can barely capture.

What is, your soul, so sweet, illuminating.
Intoxicating my heart with a sickness.
Indulging myself into you, craving.
Your supple lips, so tender, so addicting.

My sheild of love will protects from agony.
And now the natural nature around us.
Can envy our embroiling passion.
How lucky I am, to have you.

I've got you so close, I want you closer.
Heart, soul, and body.
 
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