what do you think of my song/ poem?

hellomynameis

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there is blood on the streets
and Nikes in the gutter
where is that place
where kids throw change in bins
without finding it odd
and they all pass the peace pipe
no matter where the war is
and when the war comes here
they'll be ready for invasion
in their suits and ties and corporate lies
with both hands under the table
one on democracy and the American way
one on a young woman's thighs

there is money in the streets
and dignity in the gutter
where is the place where people breathe
unsure of whether they are dying
because they're the ones fighting
whose mouths will remain silent
while those who speak see the daylight
their pipe dreams just steps away
on the billboards and in the paper
wrapped in a intricate web of lies
at my doorstep but not close enough
but in my TV that's gazing at me
intelligence is a demon
and God is a fool
stuck in a Freudian nightmare

an honest review please
but constructive criticism
and perhaps your interpretation
 
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