Okay so I write some poems, mostly about love & life. Here are a few that I would like to share and get your opinions on. if you have advice or anything, let me know. ( Im only 13 so dont expect anything amazing)
Forever to this day
I will always say
I love you,
I miss you,
I will never forget you;
All though you've forgotten me.
Cherished memories together,
Which i thought would last forever;
But nothing ever does.
Except my love towards you,
& forever it will last.
No matter what people do,
No matter what people say,
I will always love you;
Miss you;
Forever to this day.
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You feel the tears build up,
Burning in your eyes,
But never do they fall.
Your stomach drops
You feel horrible;
But you take a deep breath
& hide the pain.
Your legs weaken
You feel as if you will collapse;
But you stand straight & tall,
& act as if nothing is wrong.
No matter how much
The tears want to pour down,
you want to just give up
& fall to the ground,
You have to hold it back & keep going.
Sure, you may feel pain now,
And it may last for a long time.
But it will not last forever.
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Tears in her eyes
Start streaming down her cheeks.
Thinking about the memories;
She cries herself to sleep.
Lonliness fills her heart
Questions stuck in her mind:
Why would he tear them apart?
Leaving her behind.
She lies in bed,
Crying every night
Over the pain he put her through.
She knows she has to get over him
& start over new.
She cuts him out of her life,
drying up her tears.
Now he is the one left behind.
Payback for all those painful years.
Thanks for reading .. Sorry if it was a bit long.
Forever to this day
I will always say
I love you,
I miss you,
I will never forget you;
All though you've forgotten me.
Cherished memories together,
Which i thought would last forever;
But nothing ever does.
Except my love towards you,
& forever it will last.
No matter what people do,
No matter what people say,
I will always love you;
Miss you;
Forever to this day.
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You feel the tears build up,
Burning in your eyes,
But never do they fall.
Your stomach drops
You feel horrible;
But you take a deep breath
& hide the pain.
Your legs weaken
You feel as if you will collapse;
But you stand straight & tall,
& act as if nothing is wrong.
No matter how much
The tears want to pour down,
you want to just give up
& fall to the ground,
You have to hold it back & keep going.
Sure, you may feel pain now,
And it may last for a long time.
But it will not last forever.
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Tears in her eyes
Start streaming down her cheeks.
Thinking about the memories;
She cries herself to sleep.
Lonliness fills her heart
Questions stuck in her mind:
Why would he tear them apart?
Leaving her behind.
She lies in bed,
Crying every night
Over the pain he put her through.
She knows she has to get over him
& start over new.
She cuts him out of her life,
drying up her tears.
Now he is the one left behind.
Payback for all those painful years.
Thanks for reading .. Sorry if it was a bit long.