Any honest criticism welcome I am not quite satisfied with it yet, but what do you think so far?
Graceful Death
Death and its graceful appeal
Suicide, it seems ideal
Pills on my table
My mind is unstable
Let’s see if I’m able
The light starts to fade
My mind has decayed
I realize it’s here, no longer delayed
My life has ended
Death, finally comprehended
My spirit transcended
Hell is quite splendid
Graceful Death
Death and its graceful appeal
Suicide, it seems ideal
Pills on my table
My mind is unstable
Let’s see if I’m able
The light starts to fade
My mind has decayed
I realize it’s here, no longer delayed
My life has ended
Death, finally comprehended
My spirit transcended
Hell is quite splendid