What Do You Think Of My Poem?

Liam ^_^.

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I don't expect any good ratings for this, but an honest opinion and rating would be more than welcome! I personally would give this a 3 or 4 out of 10.


Chaos Unfolds.


Destruction reigns, and here I am,
Yet still unclear in the eyes of man.
Deeply I sleep, forever I am there,
In silent slumber my minions prepare.
Crackling in the shadows, hissing at dawn.
Fighting against a peace that will be long gone.

Here I will lay, until one day...
Man's mistakes will make them pay.
Upon my rising, time stands still...
Hope drowns in blood that itself has spilled.
The dreams start to fade, time draws near,
I am clawing at the chains that bind me here.

But still... I must wait...

1500 years pass, it is almost done...
I can almost see the darkness around the sun.
Yes, its getting close, approaching at last!
No more will my glory remain in the past.
Yes... I can feel the releasing of the pain,
The shattering cry of my brothers in flames.

Yet... these chains... they still bind me...

498 years have passed, Only 2 that are left,
Til' I fill this world with horror and death.
When Im unleashed chaos will be born,
Releasing pure terror in a fiery storm.
Armageddon will unfold by MY hand,
Satan is weak, and was stripped of command.

Finally... I am unleashed!

Finally!! The time is here!!
To fill this world with blood and fear!
Now is the time for life to end!
Endless pain destroys those who cant comprehend.
What is this!! Again He intervened!!!
He loves these mortals too much so it seems!!..
Back into the void..where my anger will grow
The waiting game begins... 2000 years to go.


By - Liam Smith. ©


Thanks for answering and best wishes all!
 
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