What do you think of my poem?

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I'm kinda the 13 year old writer on yahoo answers so don't be too judgemental. tell me what you think. Thanks!

What made me think that,
I should have let go of your hand,
Would you remember me?
I keep walking away,
Towards that sunset,
That used to be ours,
Why do I feel,
That I’ll never see your smile again?
I wish I could tell you,
But my words never come out right,
They just slip away.
 
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