What do you think of my poem?

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When we met is was just like a sunrise
A new day awakening soon
The dawn shining brightly in your eyes
Though somewhere was hiding the moon.

We climbed up the mesa in daylight
Holding hands as we hiked up the hill
The touch of your hands feeling so right
The moon can just do what it will.

But now at the scene comes the twilight
And close behind planets and stars
I know that once day dawn will relight
The dawn that forever is ours.

Tell me what you think. Thanks. (:
 
Bit soppy, not my sort of poem

but just coz it isnt my sort of poem doesent mean i dont like it. i think its pretty cool (:

very romantic

Good job (:
 
Bit soppy, not my sort of poem

but just coz it isnt my sort of poem doesent mean i dont like it. i think its pretty cool (:

very romantic

Good job (:
 
Bit soppy, not my sort of poem

but just coz it isnt my sort of poem doesent mean i dont like it. i think its pretty cool (:

very romantic

Good job (:
 
Bit soppy, not my sort of poem

but just coz it isnt my sort of poem doesent mean i dont like it. i think its pretty cool (:

very romantic

Good job (:
 
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