what do you think of my poem?

Rosalie

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i have this little tiny pain,
this pain,
is a stain,
it wont go away,
not even in a whole day,
the sad thing is,
as my tears tremble away,
my fears are still here,
missing my other half,
but my love is still above,
in heaven could see,
he will still always be with me,
in my heart,
from the start,
and in the end.






and sorry about that lame avatar my brother did that when i forgot to sign out of yahoo on the computer.then he was on my yahoo and he changed my avatar and the worst bit is i forgot how to change my avatar.

anyways thanks for reading my poem and tell me what you think of it also what would you rate it to 1-10
thank you for answering
and i changed my avatar different cause i just remembered now how to do it
 
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