what do you think of my poem?

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your lips are wet, my heart is thristy
Your body seems like a rain cloud to me
Clouds rain down upon me
Sometime send a day with me
I shall love you till dawn break
Your breath are falmes, your body is fire
They snatch away my sleep, they snatch away my peace
Your long black sliky hair curse my heart
Your eyes are a lake, Your eyes are devilish
Sometime send a day with me
I shall love you till dawn break
My eyes are saying what i cant say
Listen to what my lips dont say
I'll look at you today, get lost in you
Sometime spend a day with me
I shall love you till dawn break
 
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