What do you think of my poem?

SpiritWOLF

New member
every day a day of pain
and the house is empty

the curtains are closed
and the door is shut

every day a day of pain
the ceiling fan murmurs

to bind the mind sealed
from the spiteful world

of black shadows once
one arrives at the gates

every day a day of pain
and the house is empty

the curtains are closed
and the door is shut

the candle-light shifts
the shadows upon walls

the box knowingly weeps
underneath feet colder

than the meaning of cold
and then the box blinks

as it gives way then the
SNAP of the rope and the

murmur of the ceiling fan
and the kicking of the feet

and the straggling of the
breathing and the silence

of the cries are now

forgotten


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I wrote this while the house was empty.
 
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