What do you think of my poem?

Madison

New member
I posted this before but I have revised it and added a third stanza. What do you think?

The spoken word
Can disappear.
Fade softly into earth,
But it leaves foot prints on a memory,
It’s buried in the dirt.

The written word
Lasts for always,
Can never be erased,
For even if it’s murdered,
The evidence remains.

The silent word
Has a deathly tone.
It tramples through the soul.
Slowly killing the innocent,
Even if it has no worth.
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