what do you think of my poem?

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Luke

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forgotten tail of wasted a soul
red ocean swallowed the dream
tried to break the chain only to return
sailed to the night with a broken wing
sad night had to escape raged hot fire
the truth wont wait but the lies thicken
the door tightly closes gray over shadow
freckled undertaker waits by the road
raspberry poison life is over surrender
 
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