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The Super Men

The world is in darkness tonight
The sun eclipsed in the complications of orbit
The stars intrepid
Complicated in the sky
Faster than light in my rise

I cast a sidelong glance at the red moon
Hung low on the skyline
Distant somewhat but bigger when so
Growing greater
When the horizon brushes the earth

Displaced by the leap
I free my form of its chain
Releasing its earthly cover
Separating from the core
Emptiness

And I rip through the fabric of space
Shifting time and reference
Entangled through the complicated revolutions
Deflating in suspension
A quantum observer

The complications of a world in fluctuation
Systems fleeting and scattered
Divulge the Mediterranean remnants
Of a superscalar evolution
Complex and virulent to the coherence of colour

So fast now
The shape of space
Diffracts into a vacuous tragedy
A risen nest of risings
Ecological spectres of panorama

And the faster you go
And in time
The chaos materialize
Creation echoes
Inexistent like a complication
 
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