What do you think of my poem?

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The Super Men

The world is in darkness tonight
The sun eclipsed in the complication of orbit
The stars intrepid
Complicated in the sky
Faster than light in my rise

I cast a sidelong glance at the red moon
Hung low on the skyline
Distant somewhat but bigger when so
Growing greater
When the horizon brushes the earth

And I rip through the fabric of space
Shifting time and reference
Blasting through the complicated revolutions
Deflating in suspension
A quantum observer
 
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