Be honest, please :]
Ps. I'm only 12 so I'm just a beginner
Nothing Left
Lustrous light burns down to the crippled ground.
The warmth quickly corrupts the fragile flowers and
their illusive shield becomes destroyed.
Their paint washes away onto the desolate
oceans and pollutes its already loathsome
domain. Agony takes over and everything suddenly
becomes forlorn. Right before it's thoroughly
destroyed and burned into ashes a figure
appears out of the deserted darkness. It holds
both of it's hands near it's heart. The shadow
comes closer and a mischievous frown
gets painted onto it's face. It looked
over the mess and is displeased with
how humans treat it like trash. How they
think if it's only them and it will not make such
a big impact. They're wrong. Even the smallest
rock can cause the biggest wave. Some
people will never care to realize. A tear or
two fall from it's eyes. Seeing what the world
shifts into in just a short amount of time seems
to bring great despair to this erratic creature.
Suddenly the wind starts howling and as the
shadow's tear reaches the lifeless floor
there's no more noise. There's no more
anything. The world rapidly turns into
nothing and everyone becomes a stranger
even as a habitant. Not even a
prayer can lessen the hatred the figure has
towards the land humans live on. Nothing.
Ps. I'm only 12 so I'm just a beginner
Nothing Left
Lustrous light burns down to the crippled ground.
The warmth quickly corrupts the fragile flowers and
their illusive shield becomes destroyed.
Their paint washes away onto the desolate
oceans and pollutes its already loathsome
domain. Agony takes over and everything suddenly
becomes forlorn. Right before it's thoroughly
destroyed and burned into ashes a figure
appears out of the deserted darkness. It holds
both of it's hands near it's heart. The shadow
comes closer and a mischievous frown
gets painted onto it's face. It looked
over the mess and is displeased with
how humans treat it like trash. How they
think if it's only them and it will not make such
a big impact. They're wrong. Even the smallest
rock can cause the biggest wave. Some
people will never care to realize. A tear or
two fall from it's eyes. Seeing what the world
shifts into in just a short amount of time seems
to bring great despair to this erratic creature.
Suddenly the wind starts howling and as the
shadow's tear reaches the lifeless floor
there's no more noise. There's no more
anything. The world rapidly turns into
nothing and everyone becomes a stranger
even as a habitant. Not even a
prayer can lessen the hatred the figure has
towards the land humans live on. Nothing.