What do you think of my poem?

I wrote this a little while back now.
Its about the titanic.
Im 14 years old.


1,500 left simply to drown,
The Fateful night Titanic went down.
New York was it's destination,
Having no idea of a near devastation.
Waving goodbye to family and friends,
Awaiting a journey in which your life ends.
April 10th, Titanic leaves,
'The unsinkable ship' really decieves.
On the fourth day, As night falls,
Hits an iceberg,despite water-tight walls
By 3 in the morning, Titanic is gone,
To be found once again, 80 years on.
 
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