What do you think of my poem?

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Vaatirocks

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What is known to you as light,
Is known to me as darkness,

Your early morning dew,
Are my late night teardrops,

You burn,
I am illuminated,

You scream,
I dream,

The family in which you cherish,
Is the nuisance that I despise,

Surrounded by the ones you love,
I sit alone,

So happy and free,
So trapped and depressed,

What keeps you warm on the cold winter days,
Lights up my soul on those cold winter nights,

Your dreams are my reality,
And my realities are your dreams,

Each day we meet,
Exchanging glances of distaste,

How we think we would be better off without each other,
But in the truth we cannot see,

You cannot exist without me,
And I without you,

What is known to me as Darkness,
Is known to you as Light
 
First off, i like how it circles. That really forms the poem. Second, there is truth to it. How one sees something you see the other side of the spectrum. i find myself in the same way. Because of that i can relate. because i can relate i enjoyed it.
 
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