What do you think of my poem?

Connor

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Here's a poem which i am expressing myself in

I cry in the rain
So no one can see
My tears falling
Down they go


Thinking of you
Makes me feel so blue
My life is melting
And so is my heart

I don't know why
I wasn't the guy
That you can love
Your a girl that you only get a once in a lifetime to see
Just like a dove

I just want to see
That day where
You will wake up
And realize
That the person who can make you endlessly happy
is me

Wrote it because my gf broke up with me about 3 months ago , still can't get over it </////3
 
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