What do you think of my poem?

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Yo soy boricua

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Sitting in class
the teacher's voice becomes more distant every second that goes by,
my thoughts are now
escaping from my mind.

I start to wonder
what is so special about life,
and at that second
many reasons come to my mind.

All the birds that fly,
every second that goes by.

Every hug I get,
Every smile I make.

Every cloud in the sky,
every thought in my mind.

Every grass,and ever tree
Every bird, and every bee.

Every butterfly in my tummy
every cute, little bunny.

Every feeling I have,
Every taken path.

Every day I wake up,
and my family, which I love a lot.

Every sound I hear,
Every single fear.

Every drop of water,
all of this matter.

Now you know what is special about life,
and you should enjoy every second that goes by.



(please give me a star if you like it, and thank you :)

What do I think I need to work on?
my rhymes?
the words I choose?
 
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