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Lil Miz Giggles
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ok guys this is my poem - honest opinions but pls don't be to mean 
if you can think of changes i can make to it pls also give me some ideas for that. thanks a lot - lil miz giggles. xxx P.S. it doesn't have a name any ideas for names would also be appreciated.
another colour fades to grey,
all our dreams fade away,
i need you here by my side,
my arms are open my arms are wide.
i need you more than you know,
for once i'm never letting go,
i lost you b4 never again,
your my lover not a friend.
hold on tight, never let go,
why don't you realize that your love does show?
drop the knife, cut that rope,
your last memories can't be to choke.
the knife got dropped,
but the rope was still hanging,
my last memories of him,
still in my heart banging...
soory i'm not the person you looking for.
if you can think of changes i can make to it pls also give me some ideas for that. thanks a lot - lil miz giggles. xxx P.S. it doesn't have a name any ideas for names would also be appreciated.another colour fades to grey,
all our dreams fade away,
i need you here by my side,
my arms are open my arms are wide.
i need you more than you know,
for once i'm never letting go,
i lost you b4 never again,
your my lover not a friend.
hold on tight, never let go,
why don't you realize that your love does show?
drop the knife, cut that rope,
your last memories can't be to choke.
the knife got dropped,
but the rope was still hanging,
my last memories of him,
still in my heart banging...
soory i'm not the person you looking for.