what do you think of my poem?

[Sandra D m]

S.M.G
Hold my hand tonight
because I am lost in the wind
somebody help me battle this fight
that I just can't win


Someone would you take away this sadness
or should I just stay content in my pain
could you save me from this misery
or will you watch me drown in my shame


Hold my hand tonight
because I am screaming and no one can hear
my words of anguish and my hopeless tears
I walk in an unknown path braving my fears
searching for an answer in the mist
of these bitter years


I reach for someone that will fulfill my emptiness
I am shattered into a million pieces
just a senstive soul of weakness
without compassion I will never be complete


Hold my hand tonight because
I stand alone like some invisible fool
with some invisible mind that
it is okay to hurt me
because I can't think, love or feel
I wish I was numb to your cruelty
but my dreams you can never kill

Hold my hand tonight
for one last time
for it is you that I adore
for when we are apart we are nothing
and together we are divine