What do you think of my poem?

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Poem: Alexithymia

Tell me now is it too late to run away?
Or should we wait,
Should we wait on another day?

‘Cause everything is sure not getting better
And I’m sick of all this meaningless blame.

Tell me now is it too late to fade away?
Or should we stay.
Should we stay to watch unwinding hate.

‘Cause everyone is just a careless sinner
ready to oppose on God's own strength.
 
I think it pretty good. Just keep practicing and I know you can write better poems.

Keep up the good work!

-Adam-
 
I love it.
At first when I was reading the first few words i didnt like it that much but then it got better, and better! Now I love it. Good Luck !
 
I think it pretty good. Just keep practicing and I know you can write better poems.

Keep up the good work!

-Adam-
 
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