What do you think of my poem?

Savi

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You tell me they’re a window
This, I don’t believe
You speak of clearness-
Magical transparency
And the thing that you can see,

Though I wish it to be true,
Your thought contains a flaw or two.
In these eyes, you see no pain
But in my soul, that’s what remains,

Rarely is my glass so clear
And only when it rains-
Droplets fall along my windowpane,

My soul is hidden, don’t you see
Each eye’s opaque as it can be
 
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