what do you think of my poem?

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Nihas

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The dawn of man
wrapped in a summers breast
lost in time
the waters ever-changing
rearranging blue speaks to me
this impure gaze symphony
i relish in sunrise

The waters seen it all
cultured in its freedom
graceful in its free-fall

Teach me the hopes of sanity
teach me on our tremulous cartel
about that reoccurring gazelle
who plundered my gloom

Call upon the demons sigh
heading fortunes from the deserts cry
shady trees, balmy breeze
release those insecurities
grasping the severe
 
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