It’s truly surprising; how we forget
the simplest things in life
we pretend and ignore, thinking we are smart
that’s how we really survive
We’re blind folded
far away from reality
we’ve created a world
Where we can’t even imagine tranquility
One may ask; who is responsible
who the reason behind everything is?
The ultimate answer is shocking but true
we are the ones who’ve locked away bliss
We were given the painter’s brush
with colors new and beautiful
but have we done really?
We’ve created an excruciating and agonizing view
we are really the fools
And as I watch my wondrous world
being sucked into a black hole of terror
I cannot help but cry
but my tears have no value
since to change, we never try
I would truly appreciate critiques. Rate it out of 10. And what can be an appropriate title?
the simplest things in life
we pretend and ignore, thinking we are smart
that’s how we really survive
We’re blind folded
far away from reality
we’ve created a world
Where we can’t even imagine tranquility
One may ask; who is responsible
who the reason behind everything is?
The ultimate answer is shocking but true
we are the ones who’ve locked away bliss
We were given the painter’s brush
with colors new and beautiful
but have we done really?
We’ve created an excruciating and agonizing view
we are really the fools
And as I watch my wondrous world
being sucked into a black hole of terror
I cannot help but cry
but my tears have no value
since to change, we never try
I would truly appreciate critiques. Rate it out of 10. And what can be an appropriate title?