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flakeyguy000
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A little something I've been working on - Just wondering if it's any good. tell me what you guys think. I will appreciate any criticisms.
thank you for your time
Steve has pondered many a ponderous pondering about his place in the universe in a vast, empty universe, and whether he is simply a meaningless existence, or if his creation was with purpose in mind.
Upon meeting Ian, Steve now contemplates his value and importance to the world, having discovered he is not as lonely as he once knew.
Steve finds himself increasingly intrigued by Ian’s hypotheses to explain their existence. The concept of creation by another was explanatory, but illogical. Who created the creator?
Dan’s arrival shortly after is a startling one. Surely this means there are others. Steve had been happy his own, but with this sudden dawning of the prospect of infinite knowledge, and the key to infinite power, a purpose, he finds himself considering and longing for the presence of others.
Dan believes he can explain everything, and for now that is all that matters to Steve. Although more rational, Steve is also sceptical towards Dan’s theories. Forming randomly from matter or the concept of birth still seems unlikely, and these ideas are surrounded by such uncertainty. Surely such precision from randomness was almost impossible, and the question of how the very beginning came into being would still remain unanswered.
In the hectic thought of the decision he will have to make, a single thought interrupts this process. His mind calms as he comes to an instant conclusion.
A single thought that renders his associates unconscious.
Not dead, but suspended, waiting to be woken.
“Fuck it”.
Blocked out "f.uck"
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thank you for your time
Steve has pondered many a ponderous pondering about his place in the universe in a vast, empty universe, and whether he is simply a meaningless existence, or if his creation was with purpose in mind.
Upon meeting Ian, Steve now contemplates his value and importance to the world, having discovered he is not as lonely as he once knew.
Steve finds himself increasingly intrigued by Ian’s hypotheses to explain their existence. The concept of creation by another was explanatory, but illogical. Who created the creator?
Dan’s arrival shortly after is a startling one. Surely this means there are others. Steve had been happy his own, but with this sudden dawning of the prospect of infinite knowledge, and the key to infinite power, a purpose, he finds himself considering and longing for the presence of others.
Dan believes he can explain everything, and for now that is all that matters to Steve. Although more rational, Steve is also sceptical towards Dan’s theories. Forming randomly from matter or the concept of birth still seems unlikely, and these ideas are surrounded by such uncertainty. Surely such precision from randomness was almost impossible, and the question of how the very beginning came into being would still remain unanswered.
In the hectic thought of the decision he will have to make, a single thought interrupts this process. His mind calms as he comes to an instant conclusion.
A single thought that renders his associates unconscious.
Not dead, but suspended, waiting to be woken.
“Fuck it”.
Blocked out "f.uck"
that's
F
U
C
K