what do you think of my poem/song?

Erin

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Little Boy
Saturday August 1, 2009

Verse 1
The pain that young boy’s heart has is indescribable
And it breaks my heart to see that little boy cry

Chorus
Can you find the words to say to make it all seem ok?
Did you ever wonder what he feels like?
All the pain he goes through because of you
Can you find the words to say to make me feel ok?

Verse 2
What caused you to do this to him?
Do you have to take your anger out on him?
He’s just a boy trying to find a place in this world

Chorus
Can you find the words to say to make it all seem ok?
Did you ever wonder what he feels like?
All the pain he goes through because of you
Can you find the words to say to make me feel ok?

Bridge
To think that little boy would ever look up to him
The one who beat him for his unresolved issues
For anger at himself

Chorus
Verse 1
The pain that young boy’s heart has is indescribable
And it breaks my heart to see that little boy cry
Can you find the words to say to make it all seem ok?


Here is the story behind the poem/song:
So today I go to walmart with my mom and this guy in his 20s and his little boy I say he was around 4 or 5 years old well they get in the car and first they are just sitting there. Well the guy I thought kept looking at me but then i realized he was looking at his son through the mirror. Then he started to yell at him. He turned around and began to yell more! Then the guy grabs the fly swater and hits the poor little kid with it!!! :( After waiting in the car and seeing that it breaks my heart and the little boy just covers his face and his dad just turns around and I just look at the Dad and shake my head and I look at the little boy and his eyes filled with tears brought tears to my eyes, because I know that there is more kids out there that are getting abused from all different ages and it just breaks my heart to know that and to see that. Kids from all over get injured just from there parents abusing them, it's not a silly thing it's a serious issue! So if you EVER deside to have a kid NEVER i mean NEVER abuse them like these kids all over get abused. Do you know how much pain they go through? Could you imagine if it was you? I wanted to hurt the dad for doing such a thing! Abuse is not the answer! Think before you ever do anything like that to a poor little kid. It breaks my heart to see that kind of thing and I know if you saw it or if it happened to you, you too would be crushed by such a horrible thing.

Pray for all the kids out there that are being abused, pray that there parents will find help and that they will be healed and that the kids will be under great care and be able to just be kids and won't be hurting anymore.

Thanks hope you like it and maybe this touched your heart and i'm glad if it did :)
 
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