what do you think of my poem/song?

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Erin

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I’ll be there


Verse 1
We’ve always been the best of friends
You’ve always been there for me
Now I want o be there for you

Chorus
I’ll be there for you when you’re all alone
When you’re hurt I’ll be there for you

Verse 2
We’ve always been the best of friends
We do everything together
We share advice with each other
We’re inseparable

Chorus
I’ll be there for you when you’re all alone
When you’re hurt I’ll be there for you

Bridge
I’ll be there when the rain pours down
I’ll be there in the back of your mind al through the day
I’ll be there

Chorus
I’ll be there for you when you’re all alone
When you’re hurt I’ll be there for you
I’ll be there when you need me
I’ll be there when you don’t know what to do
I’ll be there


I wrote this poem/song and i want you guys to tell me what you think of it and give me tips and ideas! thanks
 
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