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"Sighing Waves"

Sighing waves
Moves this way
To the tune of the heartbeat that drums
Sighing waves
Sways each day
On a sunny setting
That allows the wind to come

Hear the cries of the gulls
Hear the water say its hellos
Can it be that I
Want to enjoy the sky
With the sighing waves
I want to be with the...

Sighing waves
My heart starts to cave
It feels like an explosion
With so much emotion
Sighing waves
Always stay
With the blue ocean
That sweeps in motion

Hear the cries of the gulls
Hear the water say its hellos
Can it be that I
Want to enjoy the sky
With the sighing waves
I want to be with the sighing skies

Violins play in the trees
Harps chime in the breeze
Music sets the mood
To the amplitude
Sand is sweet
Under my feet
It sounds like the sighing waves
That puts me in a haze
Hear the sighing waves
Sighing waves
I hear the sighing waves

This time it'll never go
Yes, I, yes I know
The sweeping of the waves
Sweeping waves
Sweeping waves
Sweeps over me
 
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