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I love him. :)
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Your eyes, sparking in the sunlight.
Somehow this felt so right.
As your lips touched mine for the very last time,
suddenly our hands were intertwined.
My heart breaks beneath my chest,
without you I will not rest.
I'll love you till the end of time,
silently wishing you were mine.
I let one simple tear slide down my cheek,
without you I will always be weak.
I'll love you till the end of time,
and I silently wished you were mine.
this is the first poem i've ever written properly, I don't know if it's good or not.. tips? feedback?
yes, this is actually my first poem. and yes, i'm a girl, writing about a guy lol.
I don't know how I got the kiss part, it just kind of came to me. I'm in a situation right now, and it really influenced me.
Somehow this felt so right.
As your lips touched mine for the very last time,
suddenly our hands were intertwined.
My heart breaks beneath my chest,
without you I will not rest.
I'll love you till the end of time,
silently wishing you were mine.
I let one simple tear slide down my cheek,
without you I will always be weak.
I'll love you till the end of time,
and I silently wished you were mine.
this is the first poem i've ever written properly, I don't know if it's good or not.. tips? feedback?
yes, this is actually my first poem. and yes, i'm a girl, writing about a guy lol.
I don't know how I got the kiss part, it just kind of came to me. I'm in a situation right now, and it really influenced me.