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Walking along the path of life
I look back and see little light.
Getting stuck in all the love traps
Sadness filled my lungs as I collapsed.
The pain was unbearable
I was ready to give up.
I did for a bit, I must admit.
But then I walked a little further and saw something bright,
it was a light shining there,
right through the night.
It gave me hope and a feeling of safety.
At that moment I knew that everything would be okay
I had found love again
and it was here to stay?
 
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