what do you think of my poem... Death Stealer?

[Gothic rose]

riding away with death
on a dark and enchanting horse

Hair gleaming in the milky moonlight
your face shadows all your fears

wondering why your letting death
take you away from your security place

What made you change your mind?
what made you want death instead of life?

DId you think being the princess of death
would change everything for you?

Or did you think you would have some
exciting fun
instead of a boring old safety net?

you hunger for death
that you dilluted yourself

thinking that youll be dancing
at masquerade balls

that this is your chance to be a princess
and get whatever you want
within your little grubby grasp

while hes wisking you away
on a dark magnificant beast

drifting away from the place you knew
and replacing it with his allure of magic

Showing you bedazzling lies
that he says will be yours
when you enter the underworld

while in his mind
hes laughing horribly
knowing that he has captured a butterfly
in a web

one that cant be free
from the fate they put themselves in

wondering if this nightmare
will ever go away

or if this is true
he will torture their souls forever

and for those who think poems always have to rhyme they dont. so dont tell me that. thanks