What do you think of my poem? any tips on how to make it better?

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Angel At Heart

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It's about a boy at school, who is known as the violin guy. its not very good as im 13
The violin guy
Standing tall but shy
But as he takes the stage and starts to play
All his troubles float away
As he plays his body moves to the beat
He gets lost in the music
When he plays the last note
He goes shy again
The violin guy

what do you think about its?
 
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