What do you think of my poem about my Gramma? (she passed yesterday)?

(her name) had a heart of gold
she would never leave us out in the cold
when someone needed her she was always there
willing to help with love and care
she always told us she loved us so
]but the time has come and she had to go
on November 29 she answered God's call
to leave this world,to leave us all
she is now in Heaven and finally at peace
to her loved ones,she is deceased
To her loved ones,she took a bad turn
but now her soul's in Heaven with her beloved husband (his name)
together they will walk in Heaven above
a wonderful woman and man we all loved
(his name,her name) are again together
they walk with wings as angels in heaven forever.

She died yesterday and I held her hand as she took her last breath.I wrote a poem for my Grampa when he died in 2006 and she said that when she dies,she wanted me to write her one.So what do you think of it?
 
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