I have two chapters (plus a prolouge) so far. I have the idea planned out but I want to see what you guys think. I wrote the first chapter like two days ago and i just wrote the second chapter (brand new) so what do you think? (also ignore the telling for i'll fix that later - i like to get my idea down then edit later...)
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=4975
so what do you think? do you want to read more?
thanks yeah what i do is i write all my ideas down (in sentences usually telling) and then after i finish a few chapters, i will edit it completely - read each line and add more to it so make the reader can feel the story basically. i'm actually really good at editing - my strongest subject besides math (thank god cuz i had to take the acts this week even with a lot of tutoring my strength helped me i think ...) but yeah it will be completey different afterwards
ps welcome to Y!A william
does EVERYONE say its like twilight? there are NO VAMPIRES... it's romance but it's not like he's a stalker well he's a human actually lol she's a witch (she doesn't know it) and the only magical things there are are centaurs and witches....
THANK YOU for saying it's not like twilight... yeah it's not really forbidden love well sorta since the father and the mother of the boy don't know and would kill him if they find out...
thanks i'll write more tom. for i have a whole day off and mabye sunday for i think i have another whole day off... i haven't had as much time to write but instead of writing... i've been thinking it through ALOT and i have it all planned out and memorized basically lol.. just gotta find time to write it down
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=4975
so what do you think? do you want to read more?
thanks yeah what i do is i write all my ideas down (in sentences usually telling) and then after i finish a few chapters, i will edit it completely - read each line and add more to it so make the reader can feel the story basically. i'm actually really good at editing - my strongest subject besides math (thank god cuz i had to take the acts this week even with a lot of tutoring my strength helped me i think ...) but yeah it will be completey different afterwards
ps welcome to Y!A william
does EVERYONE say its like twilight? there are NO VAMPIRES... it's romance but it's not like he's a stalker well he's a human actually lol she's a witch (she doesn't know it) and the only magical things there are are centaurs and witches....
THANK YOU for saying it's not like twilight... yeah it's not really forbidden love well sorta since the father and the mother of the boy don't know and would kill him if they find out...
thanks i'll write more tom. for i have a whole day off
and mabye sunday for i think i have another whole day off... i haven't had as much time to write but instead of writing... i've been thinking it through ALOT and i have it all planned out and memorized basically lol.. just gotta find time to write it down