What do you think of my new poem?

M

Madison

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This is only the first draft but what do you think?

Torn skin
ripped open by past scrapes,
a mask to thy true self
will one day disappear
to restore thy mental health.

Stuffed skin
result of past mistakes,
a costume to the truth,
never to disappear
without reconciliation of thy regrets.
 
i honestly like it alot!!
i like how u talked bout that bc i dont think i have ever read a poem bout that ever!!
good job!!! 2 thumbs up!!
 
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