What do you think of my lyrics?

[Cierra Sue]

Here we are again
Throwing lines back and forth
We used to love each other
Do you remember?

Those summer nights
The comfort of heat
The stars in the sky
As we danced in street

We would talk for hours and waste our time
Laugh at silence, make up words just to rhyme
My heart was one piece and everything was fine
That was back when you were mine

Here we are again
And I don’t know why
I try to let you go
But I can’t say goodbye

To the summer nights
The days of lust
The stars in the sky
Still shining for us

We would talk for hours and waste our time
Laugh at silence, make up words just to rhyme
My heart was one piece and everything was fine
That was back when you were mine

Everything was fine
When you were mine
I knew that everything would be all right
You were mine

We would talk for hours and waste our time
Laugh at silence, make up words just to rhyme
My heart was one piece and everything was fine
That was back when you were mine

If you wanna hear the actual song, you can listen to it here =)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZCTVmnyWnLw