What Do You Think of my (less than perfect) Blurb Draft Thingy?

I just wrote this in a few minutes here on Yahoo!... I hope it's not too bad:

Blood, candles, and mirrors pave the way to the beautiful and supernatural world of Duality, a land that reflects ones own soul. And when young Amelia wakes from her spectacular dream of visiting the breathtaking land of Duality, she soon finds herself practicing the chilling ritual to return to the natural beauty of a world beyond the mind's eye, a ritual that takes from ones very soul each time it is preformed (and in return, Duality looses some of its whim and beauty each time someone visits... eventually becoming a morbid and barren world). But when Amelia becomes addicted to the mysterious world beyond her very own mirror, her life falls apart around her as she slowly rots from the inside out. She wants to stop it, but she doesn't know how. And her place of refuge soon because a living nightmare, and she can't stop herself from returning. There's no where to turn, no where to hide from the harsh realities of the world....

Plot line copyrighted to Cheshire Vanderhart 2010.
 
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