What do you think of my latest poem?

K

Kenny

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There once was a man who liked coffee
He liked it much better than toffee
He drank it all day
Kept Alzheimer's away
And the secret is his name is Kenny

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I am experimenting with a new rhyme scheme what do you think??? CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENTS ONLY PLZ
I like the last line, it's a SUPRISE ending
 
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