What do you think of my latest Harry Potter fan fiction?

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Once again, I have extracted a portion of my work-in-progress to find out what Harry Potter fans think about my very, very short fan fiction.

http://www.life-after-harry-potter.com/fanfiction/im/page1.html

Please leave comments here or at the e-mail address provided at the end of the story. Cutting criticism is particularly welcome - please tell me where you find fault!

Jim

P.S. My other very, very short published fan fiction stories can be found here
http://www.life-after-harry-potter.com/fanfiction/index.html
 
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