I've been getting really interested in literature this year because English class is great for me now. We're working on peotry and I started writing my own poems. Here they are:
Haiku:
Birds riding the wind
Over the sparkling lake
During a spring day
Vast, great forest
But without the noble trees
Instead, with smooth waves
Limericks
There was a guy known as Tyler Bean
Who always love to make baked beans
Then fell in the pot
And cooked until hot
Now, he is known as Baked Bean
There was a guy named
Who's foot was as big as a toy
Then the foot was torn
And he got a clone
But the clone killed poor Antonio
Please tell me what you think about them and what I should improve on when writing poems.
Haiku:
Birds riding the wind
Over the sparkling lake
During a spring day
Vast, great forest
But without the noble trees
Instead, with smooth waves
Limericks
There was a guy known as Tyler Bean
Who always love to make baked beans
Then fell in the pot
And cooked until hot
Now, he is known as Baked Bean
There was a guy named
Who's foot was as big as a toy
Then the foot was torn
And he got a clone
But the clone killed poor Antonio
Please tell me what you think about them and what I should improve on when writing poems.