What do you think of my first short rhyme?

Mel

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(incomplete + bad grammar sorry)

You see guys out there that like they're act hard doing drugs, drinking and all that sh!t... but in reality they weak their heart weak. they have no self control. I wont accept failure like that. I had many set backs, but I deny to let it label me like that. I try to trust people honestly but I can't.. too many people put the knife in the back. I've decided to live for me so I know whats coming. too much randomness that I cant control. drama follows me like ghost. It haunts my dreams.. it wont let me go. sometimes I feel like I'm here to show the world a different way.. I feel the lord flowing through veins. I can't promise that I can be your hero, but I can show you where not to go.
@ Babli you put that on every rhyme/poem
 
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