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...inapropriate for children)? H.I.S.S
Hell In Seven Seconds

When I first heard of hell,It was from my Mother.I was three years old.I became curious and decided to learn more.From what I was told Demons and hideous monsters durked in this

foresaken darkness led by the one known as 'Satan.'
Im currently 16 years old,my Mother passed away when I was 12 years old.My Father never told me how she died.and Is still keeping it a secret.Before my Mother's death my Father was

In the police force.More like FBI.
His last case was uncovering Brittlewood's most foggeist mystery.The Mayor of the town,Mayor Brittle's wife was found impaled outside they're inner garden.From eye witness accounts the

gardener turned for only a few seconds.She was dead when he turned back.I doubt my Father will ever tell me how Mother died.As Im walking to school I can hear the wind faintly

howling at my ear.Cutting all distractions from me.As I enter the school grounds I hear other pupils gossiping rather loud.As the wind downed I heard quick whispers of a new pupil

attending the school.Who would attend school here?
It was the worst place In the country.Anyone with half a brain would know this school is hell.Il tell you why.
Years ago murders were popping up everywhere in town.People dying with no evidence whatso ever.Im sad to say my Mother was unfortunately a victim of this onslaught.The Only peice of

evidence was two small bite marks on a victim's neck.Well that pretty much wraps up what happend here a few years ago.
I enter my first class.English.My Teacher stood Infront of the class to introduce this new student everyone was talking about.The door opens and a beautiful young girl walks in.Her dark

hair swaying from side to side.Her dark blouse and red mini skirt were indeed eroctic.She had somthing about her that made you want her so bad.She was indeed the most beautiful girl I

had ever seen in my life.Her netted tights were wonderfully sexy which really turned me on.She stood Infront of the class.Our class Jock,Kyle made a sexual remark out loud.
'You're a real baby,wanna get together for some fun after school?'
It was strange.She Ignored him.I've never seen a girl push away Kyle before.
'Hello everyone,my name Is Hiss,Im pleased to meet you all.'
She seems very polite I said to myself.Her eyes were black as night.Her lips red as rose.In horror films there is always a sexy sixteen year old girl who seems to be the bad guy.I can't deny she

is incredibliy beautiful.
She walks down the middle of the class and notices Im staring at her.I quickly turn away.I breathe under my breathe hoping she does not think of it as anything more then a look of

interest.My heart starts pounding hard.She is walking over to me.

Chapter 2
She takes a seat next to me.Ive always been the loner of the class.After my Mother's death.I was never the same.I exiled myself from group activities and my once loyal friends.People

started to hate me and pick on me because of my Mother's death.I was nick named 'Empty.'
Because of my empty feelings.Hiss turns to be.She smells beautiful.Her nail polish scarlet.She seems to like the color red.I hesitate.She turns to me.'Is everything alright?'
She spoke quietly I could hardly hear a word.Somthing made me hear her.I slowly lost control as the period went on,I gained an urge to touch her.Her mini skirt was revealing her thigh.I

focused my eyes to try and see her panties.I reached out my hand to touch her thighs.'Snap'
My teacher hit a ruler on my desk.'Well,what have we here?'
I quickly returned my hand to my knee.'Excuse me miss Eve.Did you know this boy,just tried to sexual touch you?'
My face turned red.She turned to me.I looked her helpless in the eye,but saw nothing.Pure emptyness.She giggled.
'Its alright sir,all the boys want to touch me.'
She gave a happy smile at me and continued to work.Close call.
The bell rang.The period ended.I packing away my books and jotters when I saw Hiss leaving.I quickly packed my things in and dashed up to her.
'Ummm,hey Id like to apologize for what happend.I wasn't thinking straight.'
I mumbled.She smiled again.'Apologie acepted!'
I had a sigh of relief.She walked off.I climbed up the stairs to science when I was stopped by Brad.He was the school bully.'Hey boys,look what we gots here.'
I tried to ignore them and pushed my way through.'Where do you think you're going Johnny?'
He threw me to the bottom of the stairs.I crashed into the mop and bucket.Pain ached like burning fiire from mt right arm.It has to be brocken.Brad kicked me in the face blurring my

vision.All I could see what him and his other three thugs.Blurred like a stained photograph.Before I blacked out I noti
 
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